Hello friends! Would you care to take a glance at this 14 year old's poem?

It took me 3 paragraphs to work out your rainbow owed ! you clearly have some knowledge of how to structure a poem, but your mind is clearly very active and you write frantically I bet ? all the constructs of a great artist ! always easy to be led by inspiration much harder to pin a singular thought down and and focus on it ! try a blank page and create something completely new ? much more harder you should find, richard of york gave battle in vein ? or ramblings of grey balding idiot's verse ! good luck stick at it !